Cascades of liquid resonance,
Washing over solidarity.
Erosion of fury,
Stripping away
The prudential resolve
Of assurance
Pressing
Again, and again,
Into the softness of wanting Earth
In surrender
Union of substance
Fluidity unsubstantial
The pouring of fleshly inclinations
From the soul to the ground
And they find course there
Fleeting moments of fluid touches
Seared into the mind
In absence they exist
Impermeably
Necessary touches
Powerfully brief
Takes away with it
Marrow of soul and sand
Forever altered
By the pounding
Composition decomposing
While men lie watching
The water falling
smiles...nice double meaning to lie in the last couple lines...but the water washes away...
ReplyDeleteVery sexy!
ReplyDelete"Necessary touches
ReplyDeletePowerfully brief
Takes away with it
Marrow of soul and sand"
What a picture you've painted here...
so much double play on words--quite breathtaking.
ReplyDeleteLove the start lines....
ReplyDeletethe beast demands
Oh this is lovely! Thank you for sharing. I got a real sense ambiguity, so many images and ideas. :)
ReplyDeleteThank You for the kind words. I have been truly blessed by #OSW writer such as yourselves.
ReplyDeleteIts beautiful I enjoyed it so much... the last lines were perfect..
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-seed-and-senseless-living.html
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Dear Apryl
ReplyDeleteIt is working on so many levels... from the river flow to the passions flow... I got engrossed. Thanks for sharing such a lovely verse...
With your words, you hurt mind (Heart I thought would be a great word here) and spill tears.. I enjoyed this imagery a lot... Perfect thought for the image...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-seed-and-senseless-living.html
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay
Love that observance of yours, April,
ReplyDeletejust beautiful and hummmm yes sexy
:-)
Shashi, thank you so very much :)
ReplyDeleteDulce, Thank you *sweet hugs* ;)